Bhagwan @ Large

Links, pictures, and scribblings from my never-ending program of dissipation.

Damn you, Chapter 21!

I have a problem.

I just realized that Book One ends in either C.19 (68.5K words) or C.21 (72.5K). It is for the most part centered on the spiritual struggle of the protagonist as he searches for hidden truths.

The next “year” of his life (let’s call it Book 1.5) is a completely different story altogether, and is far more action oriented piece as a confident, secure Prot. uses and develops his considerable powers, gains allies, and then journeys home to face his past.

What is now Book Two is the result of that year’s growth, an epic escalation towards an inescapable confrontation that changes everything.

So, I’m done. It’s pencils down time for Book One, and first readers will have it tomorrow. I’m going to prepare another outline, and a new folder in the work file. I even have a title. Go figure.

Hopefully this will put an end to the disconnect I’ve been having with the period between C. 21 and C.22, and again before C.23. There’s too much “empty” in there, and it’s not at all to my liking.

But hey, don’t take my word for it…

I’ve had a very productive day otherwise, jamming to a new soundtrack mix I worked up this morning. Meal #4 will be in about an hour, then it’s time for a nice bottle of South African Chardonnay.

And some loud, explosion-filled movie violence. I think I’ve earned it.

Posted in Booze and Day 11 and Movies and Mr. Bhagwan's House and be careful what you wish for and books and boring weight loss crap and crazy weight loss and music and musings and rage! and stupid bhagwan tricks and work and writing by BhagwanX on August 21st, 2008 at 5:54 pm.

Add a comment

Previous Post:   Next Post:

No Replies

Feel free to leave a reply using the form below!


Leave a Reply